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Bonsoir a tous. J'ai un probleme avec mon exercice d'anglais . Je dois faire une redaction à propos de mon telephone. Pourriez-vous me dire si j'ai des erreurs sur les phrases suivantes ? Merci d'avance. ♥
-I'm going to talk about my old phone.
Formerly I had a smartphone.
My parents had given me at Christmas.
Very few people had this mobile at school and I loved it.
I was spent much time on my phone.
Especially during holidays I was spent all day dessus.
For avoids to bore me, i have playing with my smartphone.
My parents have wanted that stop to play because in their opinion.
I was became addict. My mother menacing me her to take it if I have kept using it so much.
My mother thinks i must be careful of my smartphone.
If I have high marks at school my mother decided to buy me new phone.


Sagot :

my parents have given me...
i have spent much time...
i have spent all day above...
that i stop...
 pardon je n'ai pas de temps pour finir.
Tarine
... I was playing
My parents wanted me to stop playing the smartphone because it is their opinion (ca jai pas compris ta phrase et la pharse dapres aussi)
My mother think I should be careful