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Synthèse/mythes et héros

Bonsoir a tous,
j'ai commencé a faire la synthèse de la notion mythes et héros. J'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes de grammaires etc.. Je ne suis pas très bonne en anglais, du coup je doute beaucoup.. Merci pour votre aide.
Voilà ma synthèse :
I am going to talk about the notion of Myths and Heroes. A myth is a popular story or belief that evolved in time and that conveys the ideals of a given society. Heroes are the legitimate characters of myths. A heroe is seen as someone who does things that other people can't or won't do.
How the myths and heroes do they influence the behavior of society american?
We are going to talk about the witch hunts, which have marked American history. In Salem, in the 17th century, more than 150 people were accused of witchcraft. It was really a wave of accusations, paranoia and hysteria. This case had a profound impact: it indirectly led to the founding principles of the USA. But three centuries later, between 1950 and 1960, death sentences, mock trials and mass hatred punctuated the grim years of McCarthyism. Lots of people suspected others, including many directors, of having links with the USSR. A witch hunt began anew at this time. The witches of Salem is the story of another time and nevertheless so contemporary.
After that, we have studied in class a extract of the film "One of the Hollywood ten". The Cold War in full swing, and during the "witch hunt" Biberman learns that he is registered in the blacklisted of Hollywood directors. Thus, his entourage takes away from him.
The myths can be dangerous, and can influence the behavior of people. The image of the movie The Crucible shows us a woman who is accused of being a witch, she will be banished from his own community and burned.
Finally, myths and heroes were in the mind of the American people, because they are part of American history. So they influenced the behavior of society.

Sagot :

MathieuM
Un peu court mais pas trop de faute. Je t'ai proposé une correction :

I am going to talk about the notion of Myths and Heroes. A myth is a popular story or belief that evolves over time and that conveys the ideals of a given society. Heroes are the legitimate characters of myths. A heroe is seen as someone who does things that other people can't or wouldn't do. 
I  will focus on the USA and ask the following question: How ø (pas de the) myths and heroes do ø (pourquoi rajouter le pronom personnel puisqu'il y a déjà myth et heroes ?) influence the behavior of the american society? (adjectif avant le nom)

#n'oublie pas d'annoncer ta problématique, il faut créer une connexion entre les parties afin de lisser ton discours. Utilise plutôt I au lieu de We : c'est toi qui parles, "nous allons voir", "nous allons nous pencher sur..." ça fait trop formel, dis plutôt "je parlerai de.., ensuite j'expliquerai que..."

First, I would like to highlight the witch hunts, which have marked the American history (il s'agit de l'histoire américaine et non pas l'histoire en général, il faut donc l'article). In Salem, in the 17th century, more than 150 people were accused of witchcraft. It was in fact a succession of accusations, paranoia and hysteria. This case had a deep impact: it led indirectly (c'est un adverbe exprimant la manière c'est mieux de le mettre après le verbe) to the founding principles of the USA. But three centuries later, between 1950 and 1960, death sentences, mock trials and mass hatred punctuated the grim years of McCarthyism. Lots of people suspected other, including many directors ø having links to the USSR. A witch hunt began anew at this time. The witches of Salem is the story of another time and yet so contemporary.

After that, we have studied in class an excerpt of the film "One of the Hollywood ten". The Cold War in full swing, and during the "witch hunt" Biberman learns that he is blacklisted like other Hollywood directors. Thus, his entourage takes away from him.
The myths can be dangerous, and can influence people's behavior. The images of the movie The Crucible shows us a woman who is accused of being a witch, she will be banished from his own community and burned. 

Finally, myths and heroes were in the mind of the Americans ø, because they are part of American history. Therefore, they influenced the behavior of society.
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