voila mon travail c'est une parodie du conte de cendrillon je voudrais que quelqu'un me corrige dans ma traduction et avoir quelques avis merci ( y'a des choses ou je sais quoi mettre ou y'a les / merci de bien vouloir me dire la bonne reponse ou de me corriger) svp <3

I present myself,I am one of sister-in law of cendrillon, anastasia.It is true that I have a strong corpulence and
am vile/ finds me disgusting,
but it turns out that I am not obnoxious nor there nasty, far from it.I am going to make for you an announcement very surprising.
Indeed, Cendrillon was not a
young girl are friendly helpful / helpful girl not there respectful,
but I admit, she was a very beautiful girl. My sister and i , (we) were jealous of her beauty. I am going to tell you how she started to be very aggressive.Cendrillon has lost his father during his youth. Most of authors of children's stories,are lying to you and and certainly they will tell you the otherwise.however, I lived
in his presence since her childhood. her mother decided to remarry with a man who is my father. My old man, is obese, lazy and ugly.He Was not lacking of warts, on her toenails of foot. c'est pour dire! the thing who has traumatized Cendrillon is literally that my sister feels from underarm. - an unbreathable smell. you know? and accordingly could not put itself in dress or other clothing showing her armpits.Moreover, Cendrillon made the decision to run away every evening so as not to be invaded by my own sister because they shared the same chamber.Cendrillon punishment according to my father.we learned that prince organized a boum in the famous castle. yes the prince!
All the girls were invited. The prince is a brave and beautiful man.
the prince was nice-looking. he has everything to please.
Cendrillon, who dreamed of Prince,desired to appear on the famous festival and was the first on the scene.However, my father he wanted her to do it a massage to his disgusting feet.
My sister called up in the seconds which follow godmother the good fairy who solved her problem of arm for only an evening,
she turned her into à beautiful girl (before processing, she was ugly).This one and my sister fall in love at the first sign with the prince.do you put in their places,is not it girls?this quarrel amoureuse prend another turn. They quarrelled and then my sister,decided to kill Cinderella with a gun. So in the end, the prince was only to observe me from the beginning of the boum, he was indeed in love with my.My sister ends in jail.
We get married and had many children.

MORAL : ELLE Est bien?Pouvez-vous me proposer UNE AUTRE MEILLEUR SVP
girls, no need to look like angelina Joli for found bratt pitt, all is in the heart.