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mr kroc opened his McDonalds in 1955 . He had one secret . Beef , big business and fast service were his secret . Four years later , there were 100 of McDonald's restaurants . Americans liked success .Kroc knew that . he put signs . The sings said how many millions of Mcdonald's hamburgers people bought . The number was one hundred million in just four years. Now , there are more than 13,000 mcdonald's restaurants . there are restaurant in Dallas .there are restaurants in Paris . there are restaurants in Moscow . there are restaurants in Beijing .

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Mr Kroc opened his first McDonald in 1955. Here were his secrets : beef, business, fast service/food and drive-in in this huge country where everyone is such in a hurry and mostly moving around sitting in their cars.(j'ai pas mis "driving pour pas faire de répétition). Four years later, over 100 McDonald's restaurants had been created (founded). Americans loved sucess stories.Kroc had always known that. He put signs ???tu veux dire pub ?? si c'est ça : He wrote adds, created a logo (si c'est pour le logo). si c'est des panneaux publicitaires j'ai un trou de mémoire; précise)They said how many millions of MacDonald's burger were sold.  One hundred million in just four years ! Now, there are more than 13,000 McDonald's rrestaurants all over the world. You can eat McDo in Dallas, as in Tokyo, or Moscow, Paris, Beijing...

Je me suis amusé à changer un peu ton texte mais à part 2 ou 3 fautes il est parfait. A toi de faire ton choix
pour tes fautes : secretS, restaurantS in Dallas et le there were,  pas faux mais pas top !!! opinion tte perso !!! et le "sign, j'ai pas compris....

Bravo !!

bonne nuit !

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