Shopaholic/Correction

Bonjour!
Je souhaiterais obtenir de l'aide de quelqu'un afin de corriger mon texte!
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The document is a confessions of a Shopaholic.
At the begining of the text,the narrator shops around when she suddenly see a rows of scarves.Among them she a really graceful scarf,that it's made of silky Velvet overprinted in a paler blue.At the start she resists temptation but a shop assistant urges her to buy it,since the scarf is half priced.As a result the narrator cannot told nothing but "I have to have it!I have to wear it!.We can notice that she gets mad,since she thinks this product will make her a different person,a more graceful and beautiful woman.Alla thanks to a scar. In the end ,she yields to temptation and buy the scarf.
During the reading of this text I was shocked that there are persons who thinks that a single trinkets will change their life.It is surely a consequence of consummer's society,who is going to destroy the individualism of the people.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne fin de soirée!