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Dear diary, I arrived in my "new family" where they forced me to follow their rules. The first which is undoubtedly the most horrible, it's the change of my first name. They gave me the name of Esther, supposedly because it's a biblical name. It had me worried, I repeated many times ; "My name is not Esther, my name is Kirby" and they made as if I said nothing. They made me come in a bedroom, and They made me change my clothes. A long skirt with a blouse long-sleeved, a white apron and stockings. I didn't do anything. I asked If I could watch the tv or listen the radio, but they don't let me do. They said that the didn't have the tv and the radio, because they are turned to the lord.

Sagot :

Pour "The first which is undoubtedly the most horrible, it's the change of my first name." je dirais plus : "The first thing which is undoubtedly the most horrible, it's when they have changed my first name."

Pour "They gave me the name of Esther, supposedly because it's a biblical name. It had me worried, I repeated many times" je mettrais plus " They gave me the name of Esther, supposedly because this is a biblical name. Those who worried me. I repeated many times..."

Ensuite cela me parait correct!

Voila, en esperant t'avoir aidé! :)
Sooyoung
A la fin c pas " They said that the didn't have the tv and the radio... " a la place met They said that they didn't have the tv and the radio... "

J'espere que sa t'aide
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