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Qui peut me corriger mon texte en Anglais il doit être au prétérit NO GOOGLE TRADUCTION PLEASE :'(
Voici mon texte :

One upon a time, there was three princess Sofia, Marie and Amber.
Sofia was very nice, she had got long straight brown hair, big blue eyes and a small nose. She was very pretty and she was 16 years old. Sofia had two sisters one evil and one little evil. Marie was not really evil it was sister Amber which her manipulated. So, Marie had got long curly red hair, a green eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. She was not pretty and she was 17 years old. Amber was the twin sister of Marie, she was very evil.
One day Amber kidnapped Sofia, she took him to the kingdom of witches, it is forbidden for the king and queen have made a contract with the queen of witches. Sofia had discovered that his sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch sister was the biggest stars of the witches. Sofia was chocked. So Amber took her sister and locked in the highest tower of the castle.

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Lolog53
One upon a time, there were three princess Sofia, Marie and Amber.
Sofia was very nice, she had got long straight brown hair, big blue eyes and a small nose. She was very pretty and she was 16 years old. Sofia had two sisters, one evil and one little evil. Marie was not really evil, it was sister Amber which she manipulated. So, Marie had got long curly red hair, a green eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. She was not pretty and she was 17 years old. Amber was the twin sister Marie, she was very evil.
One day Amber kidnapped Sofia, she took him to the kingdom of witches, it is forbidden for the king and queen have made a contract with the queen of witches. Sofia had discovered that his sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch sister was the biggest stars of the witches. Sofia was chocked. So Amber took her sister and locked in the highest tower of the castle.

Ragnarok
- Once upon a time
- There were 3..
- Marie was not so bad (?) that her sister Amber, who manipulated her. (evil, c'est le Mal, elles sont vraiment vilaines à ce point ? :) en ce cas, je mettre plus, the evil..)
- she took her in the kingdom...
- it was forbidden [..] to made a deal with...
- Sofia discovered that her sister was a witch, but not an ordinary witch. she was the biggest...
- and jailed her in the highest tower..
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