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Bonsoir, j'aurais besoin de votre aide s'ilvous plait : je vais passer à l'oral d'anglais pour le bac dans quelques jours
J'ai 4 notions à préparer, j'ai su en faire une pour l'instant. Merci pour vos réponses.

Notion : Space and exchange
The notion I'm going to deal with is spaces and exchanges. To begin with, I would like to give a definition of the notion. An exchange is an act of giving and receiving something else in return. It can also be seen as a continuous movement. There are different kinds of exchanges: media, people, trade, cultural, gap years.
Can we consider the borders as openings on the world?
First of all, I'm going to speak about various forms of exchange that exists in the world. Secondly I will talk you about the American dream of immigrants.
I-Going abroad = couch surfing / study abroad
At first sight there are various forms of exchange, but I'm going to speak on 3 forms of exchange cultural: Couch surfing, studying abroad and Gap year.
As a matter of fact, the concept of Couch surfing, is that it allows travellers from different parts of the world, to meet people, and to share their culture. Moreover, we saw in class a document, which speaks of studying abroad: “I would Do it all again”, where Kate Gustafson tells about her stay in Japan [Nepal / Scotland], who was enriching. We have also made a listening which deals the theme of the gap year because it also allows opening in different cultural.
II- American dream
In addition, to illustrate this notion, I've also chosen to talk about immigration in the USA. The immigrants are leaving their homeland on account of various reasons. Most of the time, they are going to America in search of a better life as many of them are hungry, poor and without a future, they may have been leaving to escape persecutions, political oppression and economic hardships. They see in the America their saviour, the USA become a dream. The American dream it’s the promise of success, is synonymous with new opportunities, freedom of speech, and freedom of religion.
Consequently, we can consider the borders as openings on the world because, they allow having cultural exchange between two space, but also it brings new hope for people who cross the border sometimes risking their lives.

Cordialement.


Sagot :

Notion : Space and exchange. 
The notion I'm going to deal with is spaces and exchanges. To begin with, I would like to give a (the... as you are talking about something particular and you had also referred to it)   definition of the notion. An exchange is an act of giving and receiving something else in return. It can also be seen as a continuous movement. There are different kinds of exchanges: media, people, trade, cultural, gap years (join the last two with a conjunction or finish off with a phrase like 'and so on').
Can we consider borders as openings to the world?
First of all, I'm going to speak about various forms of exchange that exists in the world. Secondly I will talk to you about the American dream from the point of view of the immigrants.
I-Going abroad = couch surfing / study abroad (when you use / it could imply that the two are the same)
At first sight there are various forms of exchange ('at first sight' used when you are going to indicate a contrast in the sentence) , but I'm going to speak on 3 forms of cultural exchange: Couch surfing, studying abroad and Gap year.
As a matter of fact (This phrase is used when bringing to light or correcting a false statement..its not necessary to start sentences with phrases), the concept of Couch surfing, is that it allows travelers from different parts of the world, to meet people, and to share their culture. Moreover (this phrase is used when you are adding onto something..hence if you would still be speaking about couch surfing it would be correct), we saw in class a document, which speaks of studying abroad: “I would Do it all again”, where Kate Gustafson tells about her stay in Japan [Nepal / Scotland], who was enriching. We also listened to an audio recording  which deals with the theme of the gap year which also allows for the opening of different cultural. (the initial statement was wrong as the use of because indicated that the cultural opening was the reason why you listened to the audio..look at your original sentence)
II- American dream
In addition (well used), to illustrate this notion, I've also chosen to talk about immigration in the USA. The immigrants are leaving their homeland on account of various reasons. Most of the time, they are going to America in search of a better life as many of them are hungry, poor and without a future, (full stop) They may also have been leaving to escape persecutions, political oppression and economic hardships. They see in the America their savior (they view America as there savior), and hence the USA becomes a dream. The American dream, it’s the promise of success, synonymous with new opportunities; freedom of speech, and freedom of religion.
Consequently, we can consider the borders as openings to the world because, they allow having cultural exchange between two spaces, but it also brings new hope for people who cross the border sometimes risking their lives.