Bonjour à tous!
J'ai préparé un petit texte pour mon oral d'anglais sur la notion "Spaces and exchanges" et j'aurais voulu que quelqu'un m'aide à le corriger en apprenant de mes fautes tant qu'à faire. Merci beaucoup!
Today, i would like to present the notion "Spaces and exchanges". This notion draft about different change in the world. This change can be a geographique change, technological change or medical change. For exemple, social networks as facebook or twitter, is a real developpement technological because there are site on internet where we can speak with friends, family of virtual way. This site offers different services and activity for keep contact between users. But this site have different point negative and positive therefore this is a real good things?
First, thanks to this site, today we can do a lot of things (que l'on ne pouvait pas faire avant) we can't do before. For exemple:
- Speak with family even she lives far away
- recount our life
- shared videos, pictures or news
- find past friends
Moreover, social network is a place dangerous. Some person hack account, enter whitout permission and access to all personal news of users. They can do everything they want with this news (as share with everybody). Moreover, all you shared in facebook, twitter is record on another computer even if you delete element after. Anyone know what they do with.
To conclude, I think social network is practice and interesting but be careful with our publication to no have issue..