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pouvez vous me corriger ça svp et changer des phrases qui sont trop simples
Dear Serdar,
How are you? I hope your familiy is doing well ! I wish see you more often so I am writing you a letter to share with you the big events of my life because I'm a little bit nostalgic.
I was born on 17th June 1940 in a very small town in the North of Belgium. I was a big baby with dark and straight hair. The whole family lived in a very small flat near the center: there were only four rooms. There were one living room, one bathroom, one kitchen and one bedroom where I, my parents and my old brother sleeped together. My mother sayed that I was a quiet child and that I cried not very often.
At school I was a good student. I chose economical in options because I wanted to be a notary but at the University I finally chose to study law to become a lawyer. This year I also met Hüsün, your grandfather. He was a friend of my best friend. He was 2 years older than me and had a job in a factory. In the beginning we were just friends but then we become closer and I fall in love with him and him too. After my 4 years of law studies I found also a job and after that he proposed me to get married so we got married. It was the 23th Juli 1863. It was the best day of my life. We moved to Brussels in a big house. We were far away of our parents but from times to times they wame to see us.
Three years after our wedding we had 2 beautiful boys: Necati (your father) and Osman. We were very happy. To become a parent is a beautiful sensation !
At 19 years old Necati got married and at 21 years old Osman got married. A few years later they had kids. I couldn't be happier, my grand children are the best things I have in my life. I'm proud of my familly.
So It's what I wanted to tell you. I love you and take care of yourself!
"I wish i could see you more often" "i was born on june the 17" "My mother said" "He was my best friend's friend" "And we fell in love" au lieu de "him to" et le debut de la phrase :) Met pas "proposed" met " he asked me to marry him" "it was on july the 23" "Being parent is a wonderful feeling" "i had in my life" So that's what i wanted to tell you, i love you, take care of you."
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