Bonjour Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrais corriger mon travail svp ?


September 14th 2015.

I'm writing in reply to the recent events that have occured for this month about the syrian and african refugees. In fact, i'm indignant in front of the European Community's react. They think the refugees may steal their job because they will work for less money but it's false. The refugees just try to escape from a horrible situation which is the conflict with the Islamic State. But with the reject of European Community justified by their fear, it's impossible for them to stay alive. Europe condemns them to death. The other argument developed by the European people and more precisely the European gouvnerment who consider that has too generous with the syrian or the african, it's that the gouvnerment will pay and spend too much for them. I'm angry that my government should be put in such a ridiculous position. It must change. They should understant that the refugees don't have an other place to go, except Europe because it's close to them.
We should help us ! Let us champion the millions of immigrants who are seeking liberty in the same manner that we would if we were in their shoes !
I would be grateful if you could think on the following.
Yours sincerely,