Bonsoir, j'ai écrit un texte en anglais pour me présenter ( demain je serai interrogée à l'oral dessus ) mais j'ai peur qu il y est pleins de fautes pouvez vous me le corriger ?

Le voici :

My name is Camille Hamon and I'm fifteen years old, I was born on the eighth of febuary in two thoussand.
I'm a young woman a bit shy, succeptible... but also cheerful, honest , imaginative ...

I've got two hobbies :
I play volleyball since 6 years ago, I've got 3 trainings sections and a match every week.
And I've got a drawing lesson every wenesday during 2 hours, and of course, during my free time, when I don't play volleyball, I'm drawning. That's why in the future I would like to do a job in the artistic field (like architest, graphist...).
And, like every teenagers, I adore going out with my friends, doing shopping, going to the cinema (the last time I watched «  Paper town », it was very great ! ) , listening music, going to parties...

Now, my family ; we are five : my mother, Severine, 44 years old, my father, Frederic, 43 years old, my little sister, Garance, 10 years old and my twin sister, Elise. Me and Elise are not in the same class, and in the same bedroom but we play volleyball together, in the same team.

In school, my favorites ordeerliness are the sport, the mathematical and the english that's why I choosed « euro anglais »

I have got two dreams :
In first, I would like travel a lot, in USA, Argentina, Italia, Greece, Great Britain, India ...
In second , but I know it's impossible, I would like to become a professional player of volleyball.

Merci d'avance,
Camille