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Bonjour, Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrais me corriger svp ?

Dear President,

I'm writing in reply to the recent events that have occured for this month about the syrian and african refugees. In fact, i'm indignant in front of the European Community's react. Some people think that all refugees are terrorist and they may steal their job because they will work for less money but it's false. The refugees just try to escape from a horrible situation which is the conflict with the Islamic State. But with the reject of European Community justified by their fear, it's impossible for them to stay alive. Europe condemns them to death as she condemned this litte Syrian boy, found dead on the beach of Turkey. The other argument developed by the European people and more precisely the European gouvnerment who consider that has too generous with the syrian or the african, it's that the gouvnerment will pay and spend too much for them. I'm angry that my government should be put in such a ridiculous position. This must change. They should understand that the refugees don't have an other place to go, except Europe because it's close to them.
We should help them ! Let us champion the millions of immigrants who are seeking liberty in the same manner that we would if we were in their skin !
I would be grateful if you could think on the following.
Yours sincerely,

Sagot :

Nathea
I'm writing (in reply = to give you my opinion) to the recent events that have been occured this month among the syrian and the african refugees. In fact, I'm indignant facing the European Community's reactions. Some people are thinking that every refugee are terrorits or that they might steal their own job, thinking they came here only to work for less money. It's false. THese refugees are just trying to escape from an horrible situation which is the conflict with the Islamic State in the hands of Daesh and Al Qaïda.But with  the reject of the European Community,brought about by fear, it's impossible for them to stay alive. Europe condemn them to death as they are in their country (as she condemned this little syrian boy found dead on a turquish beach  : je ne sais pas si je dirai ça, puisqu'il n' était pas sur le sol européen et que là ce sont les passeurs qu'ils faut combattre ) The other argument developped by the European government is the charges that would be too important; people think that too much money is going to be spent and that it will come from their own taxes. I'm angry that my government and my compatriots are so narrow-minded. It has to change ! We have to understand  that those refugees don't have any other place to go, apart Europe !
We should help them to have a better life, to recover from  war, from years of torture, to find peace and some liberty as if it was happening to us. We know that most of them would like to go back in their own countries because that's their culture, but if they do now, they will be killed or tortured.
I would be ...............

Je me suis permis de changer un peu ton texte à certains moments. Si ça te gêne je comprendrai........j'ai fait de mon mieux.....j'allais répondre en PV (j'avais pas oublié !) mais c'est vrai que c'est + facile avec le texte entier....
Dis-moi ce que t'en pense
On pourra continuer en pv si y a des choses qui te gênent......

Bonne soirée       :)

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