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( urgent ) Bonsoir ! Pouvez vous me corriger mon devoir s'il vous plais ! Si c'est juste ou pas et si c'est bien parler anglais :)
I'm going to talk about ma family.
First of all my mother. Her name is Ludivine. she's forty-one years old. She works in a shop named SODEXO at the clinical. she spend her time to cook because she like it.
Then there is my brother jeremy he is twenty-one years old and he is a carpenter. He go to the gym everyday after work and every week end. He likes going out with his friends.
My parents divorced so we live in a flat in the six floor. there are three bedroom, one living room, one kitchen and one balcony
My father name is Arthur he is forty-five years old. he works with the children. Sometime he sings. He did an album with his own song. On frinday night he give singing lessons.
My mither in law name is magali she is thirty-four and is an nurse. she likes dancing since she was a little girl. they had three girls.
Candy is ten yeal old and like her mom she loves dancing. she like ballet. this year she started modern jazz. she is sportswoman.
Then Bianca she is four she's dancing as well since one years et like drawing. and finally Fanny she is three ans and don't do anything and on another side.
There is jade my other little sister who living with her mother she is six years old. she dancing et love watching cartoon in the tv.
I am the secondary school " Mentalembert les maristes ", in rangueil, he is too school. There are four floor's with two playground, one gymnasium and two carteen for pupil and one other for teacher.


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Quand tu utilise she like il faut écrire un s a la fin du verbe
Nathea
she spendS her time cooking because she likeS it.
He is twenty-one (years old : tu n'es pas obligé de le mettre à chaque fois; c'est juste pour apprendre quand on débute) and he works as a carpenter. He goeS....
.......so we live in a flat ON the sixTH floor. There are three bedroomS, a living room, a kitchen and a balcony.
My father'S name................with his own songS. Every Friday night, he giveS....
My mother in law's name is Magali. She is thirty-four and works as a nurse. .....since she is a little girl. They have three girls
Candy, ten years od, loves dancing as her mom. She enjoys ballet.......She is very sporty
Then, Bianca, four years old, dances since one year and likes drawing. Finally, Fanny, only three....she doesn'do anything for the moment.
I still have another sister, Jade, who lives with her mom. She is six, likes dancing and loves watching cartoons on TV
I'm in secondary school "M....." in Ranquet. There are two schools  (j'ai pass trop compris)    and two canteens....pupilS;;.......teacherS

Fais attention à tes S à la 3ème personne du singulier, à ta ponctuation et aux majuscules après las points.

Bon courage