Bonjour est ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger svp c'est pour demain :(

I have chosen to presents an article of quality press whose name is « Brtual Images of Syrian Boy drowned off Turkey Must be seen, Activist Say» .
I think is an article of qualitfy press because it deals wich an important subject.
This article talk about the death of the young refugees, old 3 years-old.
He's dead because with his family, they have tried to rejoin an other country for avoid the war in Syria. His body have been discovered by a Turkish police officer on the beach «face down in the sand». The Aylan's death at to leave people deeply saddened, many organizations of media organized several debate for know which published picture, some organizations decided to published a rather hard picture about the Aylan's death for to react people whereas others organizations want to published a softer picture ecause they don't want Aylan's become a symbol of refugees.
After the announcement of Aylan's death Omer Mohsin «a survivor of the capsizing» wish to tell the living conditions of refugees, he explains there are many persons in a boat with a limited capacity for received each refugees wishing avoid the war and we can think this is one of leading cause of death.

I think it's a shame for waiting the death of young boy or an adult person to react the people, it's just unlikely ! This is representative of our society, everyone expects that something is going to finally react and now many people think it's necessary to help this refugees, much debate taking place about it here.
This picture has revolt many people which raised awareness that their act was better instead of acting as if nothing is happening.
This article affects me personally and it's for that I have chosen it, it's was very important for to denounce this comportement because this little boy and everyone who have sudden the war asked nothing anybody and every country should show solidarity, it does not mean that what arrives at them does not concern us.