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Quelqu'un peut corriger mes fautes, ou mon syntaxe sur la biographie de Michael Jackson:

The full name of Michael jackson was Michael Joseph Jackson,he was born in 29 august 1958, in Gary, Indiana, an industrial suburb of Chicago. He was one of the most famous and successful musicians. He was a singer and a songwriter.
His parents name was Joseph Jackson (father) and Katherine Jackson (mother). Michael was seventh children of a family of nine children. He began his musical career in 1964, aged only six and sang with his brothers in a group which was called The jackson five. But he didn't stay with them and he started a solo career in 1971. Then he became the "king of pop". His album "THRILLER" had a very success. He won 13 grammy awards. In the 1980's, his skin color started to change because of a disease called" Vitiligo". He had got married twice, first in 1994 With Lisa Marie Presley, and again in 1996 With Deborah Jeanne rowe, her job is a dermatology nurse. Michael had two children, one son and one daughter. He died in 2009, it was said that an overdose of the painkiller demerol caused his death but it wasn't confirmed.


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Michael Jackson's full name is Michael Joseph Jackson. He was born on the 29th of August 1858 in Gary, Indiana, an industrial suburb of Chicago. He was one of the most famous and successful musicians ever. He was a singer and a songwriter. His parents were called Joseph Jackson (father) and Katherine Jackson (mother). Michael was the seventh child in a family of nine childreN. He began his musical career in 1964, aged only six and sang with his brothers in a group called Jackson five. But he didn't stay with them long and started his solo career in 1971. Then he became the "king of pop". His album "THRILLER" was very successful. He won 13 Grammy awards. In the 1980's, his skin color started to change because of a disease called "Viltigo". He got married twice , first in 1994 with Lisa Marie Presley, and again in 1996 with Deborah Jeanne Rowe, she was a dermatologist. Michael had two children , one son and one daughter. He died in 2009, people say that it was an overdose of the painkiller demerol that caused his death but it wasn't confirmed.
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