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Nowadays, there are a lot of shared services which one's can help you with several ways like "eBay", "sharing leftovers", "sharing books", "Car poolong".

Firstly, shared services can help you, like "Car pooling" because you can share a car with someone even when you can't afford it. It's the best way because it is cheaper, like that, you just need one car, not two. It's also greener and you might save Earth, although we have to acknowledge it's dangerous for women who share a car with men, I mean they can harm them. So to bypass it, people created "girls only", it's a filter for women who want to travel together. "Car pooling" is also great because it decreases the number of car on the road to avoid traffic jam. Furthermore, it's good to meet people and make friends indeed. However, sharing services is undoubtedly better than shopping, taxi or something like that because people can show us their favorite places and with "food sharing" you can easily get a meal from people who are within your neighborhood and someone which want give their leftovers. Nonetheless, it is dangerous too due to food not edible and you don't know if your neighbor wants to kill you or not. In the case of "Air b"n"b" when you borrow something, give a lift, take leftovers, you can do all of these even on public holidays and weekends unless people won't.

Anyway, to conclude, "shared services" are the best way to save your money, save the planet and in today's world a lot of people use it. The number of people who use it will be increased every year.

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