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April 26, 2015- New-York, America
The Wonderful day in New-York City !
To Start Off, in the Cambria Hotel and Suites, I found my new dream home ! It is the better hotel because it is near Penn Station, Madison Square Garden and Times Square. And that hotel is sleekly decorated, modern with bigger than average rooms. And there is nice on-site fitness center ! I am satisfied, I lost weight ☺ ! I could barely sleep last night because of my excitement at touring New-York city for the first time ! I wanted to visit New-York for every times and I’m finally here !
After, I went first to American Museum Of Natural History, it was absolutely gorgeous !! To go to the museum, I took the Penn Station. I was crazy about this museum because I love dinosaurs, there were 32 million specimens of plants, fossils, animals and itis one of the most celebrated monumental museum in the world. It was double nice !! Plus I went to Riverside Park, it is top notch, because in this park we have a view accross the Hudson, I visited many historic monuments including statue of Joan of Arc, Grant’s Tomb and the place of the 18th President of the United States. And there were many beautiful views. It is exquite !!!!!
Since, I took the subway to go to Bobby van’s ! I ate excellent steakhouse and I drunk many cocktails ! It was delicious !
Than, the afternoon, I did shopping in Madison Avenue and in the 57th street shopping. It was amazing because there was luxurious shops, like Barneys New-York, Victoria’s secret, Prada, Chanel, Dior,… I chose this because I like this brands.
Finally, on the night, with my friends, we went to the famous New York’s Tribeca Film Festival, it was an experience, this festival included screenings, premieres, panel discussions, and events. And there was a diverse array of artist and celebrities, and I enjoy watching movies it was such nice.
So I loved my travel, it was friendly because I was with my friends and it was wonderful !
GILLES Amina !

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A Wonderful day in New-York City !
To  begin with , I found my dream home  in the Cambria Hotel and Suites ! For me ,it is the best hotel because it is near Penn Station, Madison Square Garden and Times Square. And that hotel is sleekly decorated, modern with bigger than average rooms. And there is a nice on-site fitness center ! I am satisfied, I lost weight ☺ ! I could barely sleep last night because of my excitement at touring New-York city for the first time ! I wanted to visit New-York for  so  long and I’m finally here !
I went first to the American Museum Of Natural History, it was absolutely gorgeous !!  I was crazy about this museum because I love dinosaurs, there were 32 million specimens of plants, fossils, animals and it is one of the most celebrated monumental museum in the world. It was double nice Then I went to Riverside Park, it is top notch, because in this park we have a view across the Hudson, I visited many historic monuments including the statue of Joan of Arc and  Grant’s Tomb , the Memorial  of the 18th President of the United States. And there were many beautiful views. It is exquisite !!!!!
Afterwards I took the subway to go to Bobby van’s Steakhouse ! I ate an excellent steak and I drunk many cocktails ! It was delicious !
Then, in the afternoon, I went  shopping in Madison Avenue and in the 57th street . It was amazing because there was luxurious shops, like Barneys New-York, Victoria’s secret, Prada, Chanel, Dior,… I chose this because I like these brands.
Finally, in the evening , we went with my friends to the famous New York’s Tribeca Film Festival. Tt was an experience, this festival included screenings, premieres, panel discussions, and events. And there was a diverse array of artists and celebrities, and I enjoy watching movies. It was most interesting .
So I  enjoyed very much my  trip , it was friendly because I was with my friends and it was wonderful !
GILLES Amina !
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