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bonjour je dois faire une bio en anglais sur John Lennon quelqu'un peut me corriger svp ?
During his childhood and his adolescence he was living with his aunt and his uncle.
In 1956 John Lennon had his first guitar wich was a present of her mother.
And in 1956 he was admitted has Liverpool in a college of art but a few months later he was expelled.
In 1957 he formed the Beatles with Paul and George, and in 1962 Ringo Starr joins the group.
His mother dies in 1958.
His son, Julian was born in 1963 and in 1969 he gets married to Yoko Ono then he leaves the Beatlesn
From 1970 of 1980 he makes a solo career in NY, and he was a peace activist.
His second son, Sean was born in 1975.
On december 8th 1980 Mark Chapman kills John Lennon in the street

Sagot :

Je sais pas si "adolescence " ça se dit, un adolescent se dit " a teenager "
WHICH, pas wich.
AT liverpool
Je dirais "Julian, his son, was born..."
He leaves TO the Beatlesn
Sean, his second son,...

Voilà, j'ai sans doute pas vu des fautes...

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