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bonjour je voudrais savoir si ce texte est correcte et je vous demande de me le corriger s'il y en a besoins. svp

Once upon a time, a beautiful little princess lived with her parents in a giant castle, she was named "Lisa", she's got a long dark hair and green eyes, the whole kingdom loved her for her kindness and modesty, One day, she was sleeping peacefully, then, a dark wizard appeared and stole the princess' soul, the princess remained asleep until a handsome prince was called to save her. The prince defeated the evil wizard with his courage and patience and brought back the princess' soul. The princess liked her prince's courage and fell for his charm, so, the king and the queen rewarded the prince by offering him the hand of their daughter, the prince gladly accepted, they got married and became king and queen and reigned over the kingdom with good will and loved happily ever after.


Sagot :

Oui, tu as aucune erreur BRAVO! :)
C'est top! Sauf qu'au début après "castle" je mettrai un point sinon la phrase est trop longue
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