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Je dois faire un devoir en anglais sur un résumé du film Billy Elliot et j'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai fais est juste merci d'avance et s'il vous plait répondez moi vite ! :

In 1984, in Durham in the Yorkshire terrier, mining village of the North-East of England, lives Billy Elliot, 11 years. He lives in a modest house with his father Jackie, his big brother Tony, minors in strike and his grandmother. Her mother died a few years ago. He follows courses of boxing, but it really doesn't like that. One day, he learns that he will have to share the boxing hall with girls of his age who take courses of dance. He decides to test and he realizes that this is his passion. But her father and his brother doesn't accept his choice, because for them the dance isn't for boys. So he took lessons in secret, with the professor of dance, Mrs Wilkinson, who finds it very gifted. She pushes him to register with a competition to enter a prestigious school of ballet to London. This one succeeded in convincing her father by showing him his talents. Jackie Elliot joined the workers, giving up the camp of the strikers for be able to pay this school to Billy. He accepted that his son dancing for trying to have a better future, in spite of his prejudices. Billy passed the examination by telling the judges what he feels when he dances. About twenty years later, Billy became ballet dancer and one attends his spectacular entrance in a male version of the ballet "Swan Lake" . Her father, his brother and his childhood friend Michael came to see him.


Sagot :

1) Mets plutôt "years old",
2) Pas "it really..." mais "he really...",
3) Pas "this is his passion" mais "it's"
4) Pas "doesn't" à la septième ligne mais "don't" car c'est "eux" pas "il/elle"

Tu devrais donner plus de peps à ton résumé, c'est un peu monotone.
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