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Bonsoir j'ai besoin d'aide en anglais UURGENT , regardez ce que j'ai écrit et dites moi ce qu'il ne va pas si possible merci bcp

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The first week of holiday, A friend (Adama) celebrated her 18 years. Holiday began at 21 h. The guests arrived according to the party. We danced a lot (juice) had fun a lot drunk a lot.
The guests were of different origins it is as it that there were several music style. Later, we all ate together on a big well-decorated table.
In the menu: Bananas plantains, chicken, potato sautéed, rice accompanies with prickly sauce.
Meal was delightful. I ate well.
Having eaten well holiday in continuing and finally the instant of the cake comes.
My two cousins and me sums part to search him suddenly and commands us then go back to the living room. Everybody sang birthday cheerful birthday, then Adama À to blow candles tears with eyes.
Afterwards she opened her presents madwoman of joy.
It is towards 6-7h of the morning that people began leaving!
It was superb! Adama was delighted!


Sagot :

Nathea
Bonsoir !
!je ne suis pas sûr d'avoir tout compris (certaines phrases ne veulent pas dire grand chose.....excuse-moi....mais je vais faire de mon mieux)
On the first week of holidays, my friend, Adama, was celebrating her eighteen years old birthday. The guests arrived to the party. We danced a lot, had fun and some drunk a lot. (si tu mets ça "some drunk a lot", ça veut dire qu'il y en a qui ont beaucoup bu-d'alcool, sous-entendu-. Si ce n'est pas ce que tu veux dire tu mets : there were many juices and refreshments, and we drank a lot because it was hot. (par exemple)
People were all of diffferent styles and so the music was. Later on, we ate together on a big nice decorated table.
In the menu: Plantain bananas, chicken, baked potatoes, rice with a spicy sauce (prickly = piquant dan le sens épineux comme les épines d'un sapin)
The meal was delightful. I ate very well.
After eating, the party went on and then, it was time for the bithday cake .
My two cousins and I went to get it and came back in the living room.
Everyone sang "Happy birthday" , then Adama blew the candles with tears in her eyes.
Aferwards, she opened her presents. She was so excited.
People left around 6 or 7 am !
It was a great moment ! Adama was delighted !


je pense (j'espère) être resté dans le thème.

Bonne journée