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Bonsoir, j'aurais besoin de votre aide svp
J'ai fait mon devoir en anglais et j'aurais besoin que vous me corrigiez les fautes que j'ai pu faire svp je vous en supplie c'est noté et c'est pour demain :(

The story talks about a girl who has been in love with a boy and he was her first love.
They stayed 1 year together.
But she has discovert he has been unfaithful.
She has suffered and cry during few mounth, and has thought at him all time.
3 years later, she has changed and she didn't fall in love because she didn't want suffered again.
One day, she was in english classroom and learned she would match with a boy living in Manchester.
They exchanged their coordinates and have learned to know each other.
They talked all the time and became friends but she started to have a feeling for him.
They trusted secrets about their story and she learned they had lived the same thing.
They decided to see in reality and she had to come in Manchester, her parents agreed.
So she took an airplane and she was arrived in Machester. They met, the boy took her in his arms, happy to see her. She was happy too. After they are gone boy's home. They gone in his room and sat in his bed. They talked a moment. Soudainly, a silence was here. The boy looked the girl and got closer her. She blushed. He took her in his arms and after, he kissed her. She blushed again and was happy.
They passed intimity moments and one week incroyable for both.
They fell in love.
It was in October 17th who was in relationship.
But the week was finished and she had to go home so they decided to see again a next week.
When she was returned in at home, they continued to tchat on the net and on the phone with the cute nickname.
They were happy.

The following ?
I don't know but they are still together.

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Danielwenin
The story talks about a girl who fell in love with a boy that was her first love.
They stayed one year together.
But she discoverd he has been unfaithful.
She  suffered and cry for a  few month, and thought about him all the time.
Three years later, she has changed and she didn't fall in love either because she didn't want to suffer again.
One day, as she was in english classroom she wanted  an english  pen pal to improve her english.She met  a boy living in Manchester.
They exchanged their coordonnées and so have learned to know each other.
They talked all the time and became friends but she started to have a feeling for him.
They confided each other  secrets about their former love story  and she learned they had lived the same thing.
They decided to met really and , as her parents agreed,  she went to Manchester, 
So she took an airplane and  arrived to Machester. They met, the boy took her in his arms, happy to see her. She was happy too. After they went to boy's home. They went to   his room and sat on his bed. They talked for a while. Suddenly,  silent fell. The boy looked the girl and got closer her. She blushed. He took her in his arms and softly kissed her. She blushed again and was happy.
They lived intimacy moments and an unbelievable week  for both of them.
They fell in love.
They  was in relationship since October 17th .
But the week was finished and she had to go home so they decided to see again a next week.
When she was back  at home, they continued to tchat on the net and on the phone with  cute nicknames.
They were happy.

The following ?
I don't know but they are still together.
Voilà j'ai fait pour un mieux mais je ne suis pas spécialiste en Anglais.
See you later.
Have a good evening and a soft night.
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