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Bonjour je suis en 2nde et j'ai un devoir d'anglais à rendre pour lundi
Pourriez vous me dire si ce que j'ai écris est correct et le corriger si nécessaire
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide
The story begins one morning in wet and cold autumn with a young girl of fifteen years called Lolita, who loves dancing, music and outings with friends.
She has boyfriend who is called Pierre and who is computer addict.
Every wednesday, they meet and create a blog with another friend named Corentin.
They spend very good moments together and shave everuthing on internet.
Except that one day everything slipped.
They are pirated their computer system and are assaulted offended on their blog.
They lead and investigation in thier high scool because they suspect one of companion but they find nothing against him.
From the next day, by taking the bus for the high scool, they are offended violenty by a band of hooded young people.
Seriously wounted, the help quickly arrived and could only to certify the dead of these young teenagers. After one and a half month of researches, the aggressors were fond and they involved well of they companions of high scool.
It is a story of teenegers who unfortunately turns to tragedy but only asks to reflect.

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The story begins on a wet and cold autumn morning with a fifteen year old girl called Lolita. She loves dancing, music and going out with her friends.She has boyfriend named Pierre and who is computer addict.
Every Wednesday, they meet and create a blog with another friend named Corentin.
They spend very good moments together and share everything on internet.
Except that one day everything slipped.
They are pirated their computer system and are assaulted on their blog.
They lead and investigation in their high scool because they suspect one of companion but they find nothing against him.
The next day, while taking the bus to high scool, they are offended violenty by a band of hooded young people.
Seriously wounted, the help quickly arrived but unfortunately too late. They could only certify the death of these young teenagers. After one and a half month of research, the aggressors were found (and they involved well of they companions of high school) QUE VEUT DIRE CETTE PHRASE ?
It is a story of teenagers which unfortunately turns to tragedy but only asks to reflect.
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