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On the other hand, we will see that their invention have positive points and negative points. First of all, the fact that there are cars in our life ease the shifting for example to go at work or to go on holiday or to go shopping. Than, the fact there are Iphones this is making more of facility in the domain of contact for example, call a somebody to kwnow where is he or call emergency department or put applications as flashlight. Finally, have a computer allows to communicate with differents persons to navigate on social networks for example on Facebook, Twitter, Skype... etc. But their inventions can be dangerous for example, nowadays there are lot of accidents of car. Young people in this generation have a fixed position on their iPhone, they leave no of their hand, they not look around them. And those who are on a computer have also a fixed position, they spend their time to play, to navigate on Facebook, on Twitter and speak with unknown people or persons dangerous.
To conclude, I think that a hero it's a real person who save the life of a people who put his life endangered and who make good deeds.

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On the other hand(ce n'est pas une maniére aproprié de commencer un text)(je te conseil:First), we will show that their invention have both positive and negative points. First of all, the fact that there are cars in our life ease the shifting for example to go to work or to go on holiday or to go shopping. And, the fact that there are Iphones, simplifies the contaxting domain for example, you can easilly call somebody, track their locations, call emergency department or you can put on the flashlight application to show youre position if you're in danger. Lastly we have a computers that allows to communicate with differents persons, to navigate on social networks like Facebook, Twitter, Skype... etc. But it's also important to know that these same inventions can be dangerous for example, nowadays there are lots of car accidents. Young people of this generation concentrate to much on their iPhone,  they not look around them while walking on the streets. And those with a computer have also spend to much time on them, playing, navigating on Facebook, on Twitter and  often contacting with unknown dangerous people.
To conclude, I think that a hero is a person who save the lives of his next ones at the risk of his own life and who does good deeds.(la dérniere phrase et trés différente au texte on dirait que tu répond a une autre question)

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