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Hello! Today, i will introduce, you my facebook profile. I have a facebook profile since two thousand and ten. If you go checking my page, you could see. That I’m French and I live in Beynes, I’m sixteen years old and I look like a normal teenager, I have blond short hair and green eyes and I’m told. My principal qualities are the generosity and the respect but I’m a little shy. My activities are playing football, listening music and last going out with my friends. I have created my facebook account in order to talk xith my friends and get in touch of the news.
On the one hand, I like facebook because we can share everybody all around the world but not the other hand, I dislike because if you not pay attention, bad people, can usurp your identy. On my account, I have more than three hundred friends; I don’t know them all in real life because some of them are virtuals friends. During the next holliday’s, I will go to Ireland with my family so I think I will share pictures of my travel on Facebook.
First of all, I use facebook to send messenger to my friends. Then, I use it to share funny pictures or videos, If terwards, I can like photos of my friends and follow them and lastly, I use Facebook to meet new people. The positive impact of socials networks on my life is that I’m always informed of the news. But I spend a lot of time on social network instead off doing my homeworks so I must try yo not use them for a while if I want have good marks.