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Bonsoir demain je dois rendre un dm en anglais si vous pouvez corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait:
1) I can see on this picture a man and woman steal under the table . I think they are in couple . The man pack with to help of his wife .I feel who he is so sad and moved to leave his wife but he want to find a bestlife.
2) in the second picture, i can see a lot of people in front of harbor. in the middle,We make out boats. Skyline is filled with fog . I think they are so anxious to discover a new land but also so excited to live "the american dream". In the backround we see skyscrapers
3) on this picture, there is a man who looks in the right. He told a bag in the left hand. Her other hand is on her menton. He wears a black blacksuit and white shirt . He has black chapeau and black shoes . Son regard est tres figee ,I think who he reflechi beaucoup on this picture .
4) I can see on this picture, a big factory equipe of enourmous machines. they worked on the assembly line.The immigrants are really so small compared machines.According to me, this work must so tiresome.
5)On this picture , I can see a bedroom very small and messy. In the background we see one garret .There is a man only sit on the bed .a man. he looks maybe then of her sleep he dreamed that her wife is died. Of the blow, he stay sleepless and he take the picture frame for to look her wife that him missed .
6) he writes a letter to his wife to tell him of the nightmare he has made and that he feels very alone since his departure. he tell also her terrible trip .

Sagot :

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Ă€ la place de "menton" il faut mettre "chin". 
On dit "I can this IN the picture" au lieu de "on"
On met "I feel how he is" à la place de "I feel who he is" et après dans la même phrase après le "but" il faut mettre " he wants" donc wants avec un S
Après pareil au 3) on commence avec "In " au lieu de "on", on met "there is a man who looks at right. He is holding a bag..."
"He is wearing" Ă  la place de "He wears"
"he has a black hat" au lieu de "he has a black chapeau"
"His expression is very fixed" au lieu de " son regard est tres figee"
"I think that he thinks a lot in this picture" Ă  la place de "I think who he reflechi beaucoup on this picture "
"I can see in..." au lieu de "I can see on..."
"they work at..." Ă  la place de "they work on..."
"The immigrants are really so small compared machines" lĂ  tu enlèves le "so" et mets "to" après compared
"According to me, this work must so tiresome." tu mets Ă  la place " To me this work must be so tiresome" 
5) In encore a la place de On 
"I can see a bedroom very small and messy." Ă  la place crest " I can see a very small and messy bedroom"
"There is a man only sit on the bed " chest plutĂ´t " "there is only one man sitting on the bed"
"he dreamed that her wife is died." on dit plutĂ´t "he dreamed that her wife was dead"
"he stays" au lieu de "he stay"
"for to look her wife that him missed ." on met aloes " to look at her wife that he miss"
"to his wife to tell him of the nightmare " -> "to his wife to tell her the nightmare"
"he tell also her" -> " he is also telling to her is terrible trip"

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