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Bonjour besoins aide en englais j.ai besoin que vous corrigé tout mon texte et traduire des mots

• My favorite star In a girl

• she's english she is born on the 21th of April 1926 in london United Kingdom she has today 91 year. she's live in london at Westminster avenue south west England. she is the queen of the United Kingdom. she has 1 sister and she has 3 boys and 1 girl

• she's married since 1947 and it's been 70 years today

• she comes from England and her nationality and English

• Description phisique

• Pouvez vous traduire ça elle mesure 1m63 elle a les cheveux lisses de couleur gris elle a des ride sur sont visage et elle a la peau blanche le nez poitue



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Pour le texte j'ai corriger deux trois truc : 

• My favorite star In a girl


• she is English she was born on April 21, 1926 in London United Kingdom she is now 91 years old. She lives in London at Westminster Avenue in South West England. she is the queen of the United Kingdom. she has 1 sister and she has 3 boys and 1 girl


• she has been married since 1947 and it's been 70 years now


• she comes from England and her nationality is English

Et pour dire quelle a les cheveux gris...ect voilà : 


She is 1m63 tall, has gray hair, has wrinkles on her face and has white skin and a pointed nose.

Gsantha
Hello !

• My favorite star is a girl

• She's english. She is born on the 21th of April 1926 in London, in the United Kingdom. Today, she has 91 years old. She lives in London at Westminster Avenue, in the South West England. She is the Queen of the United Kingdom. She has 1 sister and has 3 boys and 1 girl. (tu peux enlever ici le 2ème "she", sinon ça fait un peu lourd).

• She's married since 1947 and it's been 70 years today.

• She comes from England and her nationality is English. (je pense qu'ici tu n'es pas obligé(e) de redire sa nationalité car dans ta première phrase tu as mis "she's english")

• She's 1 meter 63 tall. She has smooth hairs, which are grey color. She has wrinkles on her face and she has white skin with a pointed nose.

En gras : les corrections
En surligné : la traduction
En italique : des commentaires

Voilà j'espère avoir pu t'aider ^^
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