Bonjour, quelqu’un pourrait-il corriger cette lettre de motivation, écrite en Anglais pour intégrer une Section Internationale dans un lycée s’il vous plaît.

To whom it may concern,

My name is ****** *******, I am ** years old and I am a student in ********* *****’s British International Section.
Since I arrived in 6ème without any experience of the English language, meaning, in other words that I barely knew the very basics, I can say that I have quite a particular story of my joining in the section.
Throughout the four years of middle school, I have increased my knowledge of the English language but also my capacities in different domains such as writing, oral fluency, comprehension and reading.
As of today, I am happy to consider myself bilingual. In actual fact, I am more than bilingual as I also speak fluently Chechen, Russian, French, including a scholar level of German.
The American International Section would be an amazing opportunity for me to develop as a person and an English speaker.
Furthermore, I envision for myself a career in hospital, therefore, a further apprenticeship of the English language would be a good way to become significantly closer to achieve this object.
To define myself in a few words, I am ambitious, hard-working and determined. I am eager to learn and have an excellent memory, I also enjoy writing in English.
Indeed I believe to belong in the American International Section of ****** *******.
I hope I have convinced you.

Yours truly,

****** ******


Merci aux personne qui m’aideront, bonne journée. :)