Bonjour
1-
Detective Eliza Garret was .......
She was sitting............
Suddenly she heard .... : someone was calling out on her..
She looked up..... and she saw ......
2-
a- When Detective Eliza Garret sat on the beach in the warm Florida sun, she was reading her favorite magazine.
b- ...and she saw her partner, Detective Harry Field, who was hurrying in her direction.
Pour la a) je voulais mettre =
while Detective Garret --> mais il faudrait écrire =
While D.E.G. was sitting......., she read (et pas was reading) si je ne me trompe pas. Je préfère être hônnête....je ne suis pas 100% sûr.
J'espère t'aider quand même.
Bonne journée :)
