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There are many types of video games like the educationnal video games, the video games with violence and the the video games for diversion. That is why there is the question : "Video games are good or not ?"
Video games can increase the coordination between hands and eyes. in some of video games, it's necessary to press the button at a very specific time. When you see that at the screen, that it's the good time for press th button.This manipulation can develop your reflex.
They can develop the mutual aid and the sharing, too. When you play together, you share a moment with your friends. If you play in team, you can helpyour friends whn he is in bad situation.
But the video games are sometimesan addiction. In fact, lots of people are addicted to video games. It's like drug for us and when they have problems they take refuge in video games.
Video games do not allox people to develop socialy. Whn someone plays at the video games, he is usualy alone in his room, and he is not in interaction with other person. Maybe, after he can be withdrawn.
To conclude, video games are a good think if the people know how to stop.
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