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Bonjour pouvez vous corrigé mon texte en anglais ( pouvez vous me corrigé si jai fais des fautes au niveau du prétérit ) et puis m'aider a faire une phrases en B+Ving en rapport avec le texte voila s'il vous plait merci :)

A jaded old cop, Inspector William Somerset was only a few days away from retirement. However, he received a final investigation into a murderer who decided to purify society by committing seven murders based on the seven deadly sins: gluttony, avarice , sloth, lust, pride, envy and anger, and to help him, his future replacement, David Mills, a young impetuous policeman with a strong and recently married character. In a city where the rain never seems to stop falling, the two men follow in the footsteps of the serial killer. As the investigation progressed, the two men were only sure of one thing… It may be that the worst was yet to come.


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A jaded old cop, Inspector William Somerset was only a few days away from retirement. However, he received a final investigation about a murderer who decided to purify society by committing seven murders based on the seven deadly sins: gluttony, avarice , sloth, lust, pride, envy and anger, and to help him, his future replacement, David Mills, a young impetuous policeman recently married with a strong character. In a city where the rain never seems to stop falling, the two men follow in the footsteps of the serial killer. As the investigation progressed, the two men were only sure of one thing… It may be that the worst was yet to come.

Voilà les fautes sont corrigées en gras.

Pour ce qui est de la phrase en B+Ving s'il suffit que ce soit en rapport avec le texte tu pourrais écrire quelque chose comme

"Together the two policement are engaging in a difficult case." (Ensemble les deux policiers s'engagent dans une affaire difficile).