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Bonjour pouvez m'aidez a corriger mes fautes : Consignes : Simplifier les phrases, les raccourcir, éviter la répétition en organisant mieux les idées:

Tue russian launched Sputnik in 1957, october 4th in 1957 it's the Coldwar. Sputnik is a sattelite. The USA is a country with great science. Before have launched the Sputnik. I really exited ans u wished the sucess og the Russians because is the first sattelite in the sky.

My reaction and fellings to the sucess of the Russians feels jealous ans happy because i want launched the first sattelite. And i was scary if the sattelite explose. In the history the USA feels jealous of the USSR ans is humiliated because they saw that the USSR. Sputnik was explosed because they have no the great technology, they was humiliated and angry. The USA when they want. The American have TV, mobile whereas the URSS have no technology

I imagined of the future after Sputnik is a futut with no problem with USA ans URSS , sattelite. And launche another my first sattelite with my children, familt...
The sputnik is a diary precious in the earth. There are much emotions, feelings, reacted... . In the moment there are much sattelite in the sky launched by differents country

In 21 s there are more of technology, there are no bombe explosion

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The russian launched the satellite Sputnik during the Coldwar, the 4th october 1957.

The USA has great science.

La phrase suivante est inutile

I was really exited and I wished all sucess for the Russians because it was the first satellite in the sky.

Jealous and happy were my feelings.That was my reaction to the sucess of the Russians because I wanted launch the first satellite. I was scary too, in case the satellite explode.

Sputnik explode because URSS had not a great technology. They were angry and humiliated.

The American had TV and mobile but the URSS, nothing.

I supposed that in the future, URSS and USA will have no problems. I'll launch my first satellite in the sky with my family or my future children.

Sputnik is a famous diary on the world.

There are many react and comment about that.

At the moment, there are many satellite in the sky, launched by différent countries on the world.

In 21 century there are more technology.

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