Bonjour, j'ai besoin d'aide, c'est urgent svp
Donc, j'ai un devoir en anglais, et j'ai besoin que quelqu'un me corrige mon devoir: grammaire, vocabulaire, maladresse...

Adrian Mole, 16 years old, disappeared since Saturday, April 2nd. This day, in the neighborhood of 10:30 a.m, a young boy left its place of residence. He was perceived for last time in Manchester Railway Station. This day was special for this boy: it was his birthday. Indeed, nobody said to him " Happy Birthday" to him, then he ran away, but not only, with this dog.

Adrian Mole was in railway station precisely in the coffee. He stayed there all morning long because awaitress ordoned out of the railway station café to Adrian because his dog kept going behind the counter and begging for bits of bacon..
Having perceived that nobody had wishes him a happy birthday, Adrian Mole decided to buy himself a birthday card and to write a message from imagined the wisheshis parents are supposed to write to him. Then, in 9:30 p.m, nobody noticed him a runway. However, nobody reported him missing inthe Go'oclock news. Therefore, he decided to call the police for help, he disguised his voices.

Adrian Mole at the beginning, was very anxious and very happy because it is his birtjday. But, when he noticed that nobody has wished him a Happy Birthday, he left abandoned, alone, sad.
He thinks his parents are sad die to his absence, he feels unhappy and miserable.
Finally, when he has call the policeman, the policeman thinks Adrian Mole is joking, they do not take him seriously..

Voila, donc merci d'avance & bonne chance : )