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Bonjour,
J'ai écrit un texte qui défends l’égalité et j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez mes fautes.
I would like to thank the secretary general of the united nation. I am here today this is defend and protect the country, I hold to you talk a subject very important in our society. This subject is equality, I got it very uneven to diffentiate the people only because they have not look alike or because they have not the same religion or origin. We are all some humans! This is what counts! We live all the same soil, person should not be greater than the other this is unacceptable! For a country be strong I needs population united and faithful. Our children need to grow together in peace. We are in a free country and this should be a priority equality there, together we are stronger. I see many people who do not want to associate with people because they are black skins. It is not a cause! What matters is not the physical of a person but that’s what we have in the heart. With your behaviour you let them feel left out. You learn a lot of people helped greatly to national development what I mean that everyone should respect each other even if it part of another origin or religion. Everybody should have the same right and we can live in peace and serenity! I hope that this equality shall take place in the world. It is for us to start implementing this equality in this way the example we give to all others. For me is an injustice differentiates a person for their physical or their level of live. He must fight against this difference! Thank you very much.
slt ma belle ! c'est un tres bon paragraphe mais je trouve dans la premiere phrase , que c'est mieux de dire : the genera secretary ......I'm here today to defend and protect my country (je trouve que c'est mieux ^^)
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