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Bonjour, quelqu'un pourrait-il me dire si mes phrases sont correctes
ou/et si ça ne fait pas hors-sujet? s.v.p

Expression écrite en anglais noté (300 mots minimum)
sujet : "according to you, what does being in -between two cultures- imply?"






It's interesting being part of two cultures because
there are mix and match of different aspects of both.


Some people can talk two languages, because they have learnt
the official language of the country where they live
and they can also learn the other language of the ethnic of their family.
They can also have many religious holidays and they can celebrate
twice end of year festive season because of the holidays calendar.
For example, I celebrate New Year’s Day on January 1st
as well as Chinese New Year.
Have knowledge from two cultures and their food
is fusion or mix of dishes of different ethnic origin.
This can help to create new special dishes,
cooking different and enrich the culture of the country.

Border two cultures imply too, being a part
of community group, people regroup in communities groups
and they can share their cultural heritage or help others in these communities.
I guess that everyone try to understand and appreciate the cultures,
customs, and traditions of all the world,
whether they were born in the country or came here from another country.
There are many different cultural and ethnic groups,
and often they live and work in harmony.
It's contributing to protect and promote their languages, traditions
and especially the cultural diversity of the people and country.
That contributes to the country identity.



Being between two cultures imply to be mostly exposed to the advantages
of both cultures and eradicate stereotypes of what it means to be this or that.
Even if often, those between two cultures feel upset over a racist jibe or
the different treatment by the others who have a different origin to hers.
But they have less prejudiced to others and respect cultural differences easily.
All I know is that I would never judge anyone negatively on something as superficial as looks.

Sagot :

Tes phrases me paraissent correctes
Dans l'ensemble cela est tres correct mis a part quelques petites choses que je voudrais modifier :

Dans la premiere phrase je dirais plus :

It's interesting being part of two cultures becausethere are a mix of the different aspects both. 

Pour "Have knowledge from two cultures and their foodis fusion or mix of dishes of different ethnic origin." je rajouterais un "the" avec "mix or dishes"

Pour "It's contributing to protect and promote their languages, traditionsand especially the cultural diversity of the people and country." je rajouterais un "the" devant "country"

Voila! J'espère t'avoir aidé ! Sinon tu as fait un bon boulot ! :)
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