👤
Kwikes
Answered

Obtenez des conseils d'experts et des connaissances communautaires sur FRstudy.me. Obtenez des réponses détaillées et bien informées de la part de notre communauté de professionnels expérimentés.

Bonsoir,
J'ai un oral en Anglais Européen, pouvez vous me corriger le texte s'il vous plait. =)
"My name is ______, I’m fourteen.
I was born on 8th of January 2001
I’m from France
I have got 1 sister and my parents are married
I was born in ___________ and I live in ________.
I’m Capricorn like Mel Gibson and Kate Middletone.
I want to be a trader in Wall Street when i grow up.
I would like to go in New York City
My idols are Dan Carter and Rafael Nadal.
I’m patient, practical, good tempered and hard working.
I don’t like people who pretend to be superior than you.
I enjoy playing video games when I have got free time. I play every day and I spent 2 or 3 hours a day. I like playing tennis too.
Although I don't play rugby, I like watching Rugby World Cup match with my father."


Sagot :

Tu peux dire I've got ( ce que ma conseillé ma prof' ) ça fait moins lourd ^^ ! sinon après je vois aucune faute !
"I'm from France" serait plus correct en "I live in France" ou "I'm French".
I've got est aussi possible.
Kate Middleton sans "e" à la fin.

sinon je n'ai pas vu d'autres fautes x