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MY most favorite movie is Soul surfer. For the first time I saw this movie in my friend 's home .it is drama Country of Origin United States The director of the film is Sean McNamara.The main actors are AnnaSophia Robb.Release Lorraine Nicholson Dennis Quaid
Helen Hunt
Carrie Underwood date was April 8, 2011
This movie is very good, interesting, educational, kind, and etc. Based on a true story
This movie is about a girl, who lives with his parents and two older brothers. All are surfers, but she and her best friend are the most talented and predestined for a professional career. This girl wanted to become professional one.Everything changes when, one training
it is attacked by a shark. Everything changes when, one training it is attacked by a shark.She survives but loses an arm, she was afraid never able to surf.
But this case prevented her from doing so.The girl was very discouraged by this incident. But after some time with the help of her family she stood up .She became , what she wanted to become. .After completion of the tender seconds
He makes the best surf , the jury don't count it But the winning contestant leaves for her prize .
I just like this film,it is really amazing, it gives much inspiration for teens like us.
It isavery interesting movie and this movie has impressed me.


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my favorite movie is "Soul surfer. for the first time, i saw this movie in my friend's house.
It's a drama, this movie is about the origin of the United States countries. The director is Sean Mcnamara. The actors are Anna Sophia and Helen Hunt.
The carrie underwood was april 8, 2011.
ok je te réecris le texte en version corrigée:

My favorite movie is Soul surfer, the first time I saw this movie was at my friend's house, the movie is from the United States, it was directed by Sean McNamara and the main actresses/actors are AnnaSophia Robb, Helen Hunt, Carrie Underwood and  Dennis Quaid. 
The movie came out on the 8th of april 2011 in  the US. This movie is very good, interesting, educational, etc... 
This movie is about a girl, who lives with her parents and two older brothers. All are surfers, but she and her best friend are the most talented and predestined for a professional career. This girl wanted to become a professional surfer, but everything changed when during training she was attacked by a shark. She survived the shark attack but lost an arm and she was afraid she might never be able to surf again. But after some time, and with the help of her family she was able to do so. She was finally able to become what she had always want to be. Durin a competition she surfed the best, unfortunately the jury does not agree and gives the prize to another contestant but this winning contestant decides to give her the prize. 
I just like this film, it is really amazing, it inspires a lot of teens, like me for an example. This movie and very interesting and impressive.

Voilà voilà, y a peut être encore quelques erreurs mais normalement c'est bon ^^
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