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Salut !

Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle for their honey moon. They are in
their bathroom.
“My Dear, can you get my bag please‘‘she asked.
During Peter was finding the Kathy bag, she went to the Kitchen to take a
knife and she went back to the bathroom.
“I have found it! ‘‘He shouted .Peter was brushing his teeth. When he
finished, he drank water and suddenly he fell because of poison which Kathy
put in our glass.
Few hours later, Peter was tied up in the room. Kathy was waiting Peter
wake up, next she yelled that Peter give the code of his safe but he
refused because there was all money inside. Kathy put in an enormous angry
and she threaten him with the knife. Peter didn’t understand anything’s
because he loved Kathy and she had many gift, jewelry or clothes… but she
had not always the famous code. Kathy went in Kitchen to drank, it was 11
pm and during this time, peter who was our phone in front of him, he told
the police and wait that arrive.
“Give me this code‘‘she shriek and peter kept the silence…
The police arrived in one hours later and Kathy was stop and driven in
prison for assassination attempt and attempt to poison.
THE END
est que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mon texte?
merci bcp :)

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Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle during their honey moon. They were in their bathroom :
“My Dear, can you get my bag please?‘‘she asked.
 Peter was finding the Kathy bag when Kathy went to the Kitchen to take a 
knife:
“I have found it! ‘‘shouted Peter .
He was brushing his teeth and at the time he drank water he fell on the floor. Katy had put poison in his glass
Few hours later, Peter was tied up in the room. Kathy was waiting Peter to wake up to have his safe. He refused and she yelled at him threatening him with the knife. Peter was disappointed because he had loved Kathy with all his heart and she wasn't who she supposed to be.
She wasn't looking at him so he decided to take his phone quietly to call the Police 
“Give me this code !‘‘she sreamed 
Peter kept the silence. The police arrived one hour later. Kathy have been sent to jail for assassination attempt and attempt to poison.
THE END

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