Bonsoir, je passe bientot mon oral de bac en anglais. Pouvez vous me le corrigez ? s'il vous plait. Je vous remercie d'avance.


I'm going to talk about the notion idea of progress. The notion can be define as improvement, a development or a change technical , scientif or social advance which contributes to making the world a better.We will answer this question: Does the woman's place evolve?Firsty, we will see the woman's place before.Secondly, of the place that women have today.


In the first time we studied a photo from the document "American Family Life". We notice that men and women were not on an equal footing. We saw that the woman in the 50's had to stay home. She was a housewife. She had to eat and take care of the children. While the man was working on him and taking care of bringing back the money.Women depend on their husbands.With the document "A booming business" We have seen that women in India do not choose their husbands. Their marriages are arranged marriages. Her husband Ramesh works but he does not earn much so Sarita's wife decides to become a surrogate mother to make money. Her husband was not happy but he decided to agree to support her.


In the second time, now women are allowed to work, their husbands support them such as Ramesh and Sarita. But some are narrow-minded as the document we saw where there were two couples Juliet and Benedict and Matthew and Louisa. At a dinner party Mathew says he wants to fire one of his employees because she asked for a day off to take care of her baby. He says he will refuse and Juliet will be shocked. For her, mathew is sexist, he does not care about women. He represents the man of the 50s.


To conclude we can say that the place of the woman has to evolve because she can exerted a work. Some men are sexist and others encourage them. We can say that this doccument illustrates this notion because the position of the woman has evolved over time. Which shows progress.