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Bonjour,
j'ai mon oral d'anglais dans quelques jours et mon niveau étant très bas, j'ai besoin d'aide pour la correction de mon sujet sur Sydney
Merci pour vos réponses.

SYDNEY

Intro:
Australia is on the Oceania continent.
Sydney is the most populated city of Australia with a population of 4 700 000 (four million seven hundred thousand) inhabitants. (en 2012, in two thousand twelve)
Sydney is the capital of New South Wales.
identity card of Sydney: country:Australia
state:News Galles of the south
region: New South Wales
postal code:NSW 2000
population: (2012) 4 700 000
surface:12.144km²
density:385/hab/km²
Lord-mayor:Ms Clover Moore
money:Australian dollar (AU$)

History:
The first inhabitants of Australia were the Aborigenes.
They arrived approximately 50 000 years ago. (fifty thousand)
On January 26, 1788 (seventeen eighty eight) The British arrived at Sydney and made Australia a colony.
So, since this day, January 26th hasbern the national day.
After, much of other colonies were formed. And on January 1st, 1901 a federation of six colonies become The Commonwealth of Australia.
So, the country is seperated in 6 states and 2 territories.
Jorn Utzon realizes the Opera House which was inaugurated on 23 October 1973 (nine teen seventy-three) by Elisabeth The Second who is Queen of Australia.

Geography
Today, Sydney is framed by the Pacific Ocean to the east, the Blues Montains to the west, the river Hawkesbury to the north and the Woronora Plateau .
The climate is pleasant . You should know that seasons are reversed compared to the Europeen Continent.
Tourist city
Sydney is a international tourist city thanks to her beaches and her monuments like the famous Opera House and the Harbour Bridge.
There are mans national park, which is good for outings.
The large parks like The Park National Royal attract hikers.
There are many museums such as:
Australian museum:history
Powerhouse Museum:science and technologies
National maritime museum in Darling Harbourg
Tourists can also visit the oldest area of Sydney:The Rocks.
Finally, Sydney is a very big city.

Merci de votre aide

Sagot :

Bonjour, 

Intro:
On ne dit pas Australia in on the oceania contient, mais "is in Oceania".
Pas besoin de "continent".
habitants se dit habitants et pas inhabitants (habitant est un mot transparent).
Surface = Superficy

History:
Habitants...
Aborigènes = Aborigens
Après 26 n'oublies pas le th (the twenty-sixth)
"And they made" on dit "they have made" C'est le present perfect.
So, Since this date, January 26th IS the national day
Others colonies
N'oublies pas 23rd (the twenty-third)
Sois tu dis 23rd OF october ou October 23rd
Elle n'est pas vraiment reine d'Autralie, elle est la gouverneur du Commonwealth (She's the commonwealth governor)

Geography:
Ne te casses pas la tête dis the temperatures
European
Syndney is a TOURISTIC CITY
thanks to her beaches...? = Merci des ses plage? (TA PHRASE NE VEUX RIEN DIRE)
Ne dis pas "to her beaches", mais "to its beaches"
"There are many..." (pas de transformations plurielles ça l'est déja)
Ne dit pas "finally" mais dit "to conclue..."

J'espère t'avoir aidé.
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